The political reporting in the NYT is getting more and more ridiculous as we get closer to November 2. As far as I can tell, the paper hasn't been doing a bad job on the Al Quaquaa story. Jim Dwyer and David Sanger had a story yesterday that outlined what is known about the explosives so far. But what's up with today's Wilgoren and Bumiller aticle that gives BushCo all the pre-election cover he needs about the missing explosives?
The exact timing of the disappearance of the explosives is critical to the political arguments of each campaign. Mr. Kerry's contention that the administration did not adequately secure the country and was unprepared for the war's aftermath presumes that the explosives disappeared after the fall of Saddam Hussein on April 9, 2003, as officials of the interim Iraqi government say.
If the explosives disappeared before Mr. Hussein fell, as Mr. Bush now says is possible, that would undercut Mr. Kerry's argument and bolster Mr. Bush's contention that his opponent is making charges without all the facts.
Those are the seventh and eighth grafs of the story. The lede is that BushCo is fighting back. Above all, NYT readers, never forget that BushCo is vigorous and resolute. There's a single sentence that mentions that the story "could be hurting the president" and that finally speaking out is a reflection of that possibility. Compare that one sentence to the hysteria that was reported when Kerry held back from dignifying the Swift Boat Liars with a comment and how that decision was costing Kerry the election.
The rest of the story, up until the last two paragraphs, is devoted to putting forth BushCo's lies about what happened to the weapons. They were gone when the troops got there. The Iraqis moved them. Kerry hates the troops. His accusations are wild! Kerry was wrong about Tora Bora too ... I understand that the story is reporting what BushCo said, but if he said that water boiled at 97 degrees, would it be right to devote the bulk of a story to explaining that assertion? It isn't until the last two paragraphs that we get to what should have been the lede of the piece:
But Mr. Bush on Thursday did not address a critical issue raised by the discovery of the missed explosives: why American forces were not alerted to the existence of a huge cache of explosives, even though the atomic energy agency and American officials had publicly discussed the threat it posed, and knew its exact location.
The commander of the troops that went into the Al Qaqaa facility on the way to Baghdad in early April, Col. Joseph Anderson, of the Second Brigade of the Army's 101st Airborne Division, has said he was never told the site was considered sensitive, or that international inspectors had visited it before the war began.
It's not "a critical issue." It's the critical issue. It would be impossible to have made this story any more confusing and less informative.
Now look at the a today's Wilgoren story about Kerry in Iowa. He's desperate and needs Iowans to save him again. He's phony and pandering when he speaks to Iowans. It's more of the same poison peanut butter we get from her about Kerryt. Here's the lede:
The urbane, Boston-bred Senator John Kerry likes to say his quest for the White House has taught him to "measure my life by the height and color of the corn" in this state. He waxes about its "smart citizens." He lists the discovery of biodegradable soy lubricant at Northern Iowa University in Waterloo, as a symbol of America's can-do innovation.
But the very state that in January catapulted Mr. Kerry toward the Democratic nomination has become, as Election Day approaches, the most difficult of those that Democrats won in 2000 to defend. He spent most of Wednesday here, his fourth visit this month, begging Iowa's voters to save him a second time.
That biodgrabale soy lubricant that has Kerry so jazzed and Wilgoren sneering? That's part of Kerry's energy policy. The same energy policy that the NYT has been ignoring completely. And has the NYT ever characterized BushCo as "begging for votes?" The same BushCo who is an incumbant that can't break 48% nationally?
BushCo's coverage is pure peanut butter, but it's the yummy kind that candidates love. Here's Sanger's BushCo in Iowa story from yesterday.:
At each stop, Mr. Bush looked energetic and almost ebullient, playfully joking with crowds that sometimes seemed larger than his margin of defeat - 5,708 - four years ago. He spent 15 minutes at the dairy farm of John and Connie Turgasen in tiny Viola greeting four generations that have worked the same farm - the endangered species he says his tax policies will benefit.
There are those valuable Ketchum Points again. He's happy, ebulliant, energetic, playful - drawing big crowds. When he stops at a dairy farm it's to make a policy point, not to play political footsy with some yokels for a photo-op. Gosh, that Rove is an effin' genius, isn't he? He found a dairy farm in Iowa.
Or how about Stevenson's fawning and unnecessary analysis of BushCo's stump speech, also from Wednesday: (emph mine)
His stump speech evolves from day to day as he hustles with increasing urgency through the battleground states seeking to score points against Senator John Kerry. But no matter what the venue or the topic, President Bush always starts by thanking his partners - one in love, one in running the country.
Before getting on with his withering assault on Mr. Kerry, the president tries to establish an emotional connection with his audience by making clear his deep affection for Laura Bush, his wife of almost 27 years.
Then it is on to an expression of loyalty to Vice President Dick Cheney, a lightning rod for the administration's critics but a hero to conservatives like those who wait hours in arenas and on ball fields and in parking lots to hear Mr. Bush speak.
"I readily concede my running mate does not have the waviest hair in the race," Mr. Bush said on Tuesday in Onalaska, Wis., drawing appreciative laughter with his hardly veiled belittling of Mr. Kerry's running mate, Senator John Edwards. "You'll be pleased to know I did not pick him because of his hairdo."
A stump speech is in many ways a look into the mind and character of a political candidate. In Mr. Bush's case, the speech is delivered with typical discipline; he almost never veers from his text by more than a few words.
In nearly all its incarnations, the speech mixes glimpses of his warmth toward his family with calculated signals to his conservative base, references to his religious faith, flashes of his wisecracking humor, policy prescriptions, succinct explanations of his worldview and a gauzy sense of his basic optimism.
"Freedom is on the march," he said Tuesday in Wisconsin. "Freedom is on the move. And our country is better for it."
Except we heard several days ago that BushCo has retooled his speech completely. Remember how Team BushCo punk'd the cable networks by saying he had a new policy speech to deliver? The NYT fell right in line with front page coverage even though they had time to figure out that it was nothing of the kind. They covered their butts by saying that it was shiny and new. Now we're back to disciplined consistency that almost never varies by more than a few words.
To add insult to injury, Stevenson ends the story by recapping the now mythic tale of the person (Stevenson doesn't mention that it used to be a fireman or policeman but now BushCo can't remember which.) who said to BushCo from the rubble, "Don't let me down." All that was missing was the closing line: "I'm George W. Bush and I approved this message."
Now look at Halbfinger's 10/26 story about Kerry's stump speech:
Mr. Kerry and Mr. Bush could not be more different on the stump. While Mr. Bush is still delivering many of the same punch lines he was months ago, Mr. Kerry's change by the hour. And while little changes from day to day in the president's speech except the names of the cities he compliments and the local officials he praises for "filling the potholes," Mr. Kerry has never given his stump speech the same way twice.
This is partly by design: he is a speechwriter's nightmare, adding needless words and phrases to a prepared text the way some catalog companies bury products in foam peanuts.
Mr. Kerry works with building blocks, extended chunks of material that he constantly mixes and matches and remolds, as if he feels his listeners deserve not only his full attention but spontaneity to boot. And he is only too glad to provide it, as he did in Orlando, when the wind picked up his sheet of notes and blew it into the crowd. "That's all right, let it fly," he said. "I don't need it."
This is also by inclination: some of his funniest lines are improvised. A month ago, playfully mocking Mr. Bush's economic policy of "tax relief," Mr. Kerry likened it to the kind of relief felt when someone "breaks into your living room and relieves you of your TV set." The audience roared and a new riff was born, though it disappeared a few days later.
At other times Mr. Kerry's winging it means he is left searching for his place, distracted by his own thoughts, trying to make sure he has covered every subject and said everything he can about each one.
It's actually a good story. I've seen Kerry seem to lose his place as he thinks about what he's saying and I have noticed that his speeches change frequently. However, I attributed that mostly to having to keep up with the constant revelations of BushCo's incompetence, instead of some kind of personality quirk as Halbfinger does. The difference between this and the ode that BushCo got from Stevenson couldn't be more clear. Kerry is a human being; BushCo is a god. Imagine this ending ever showing up in a BushCo story: (emph mine)
Mr. Kerry frequently works into his speeches the names and stories of people he has met along the campaign trail. But this mystery woman had given no name; she had just passed along to a Kerry staff member a simple message for the candidate. "Senator," it said, "we've got your back."
If the story is true, it is just as well the woman did not give her name and say what issue or problem motivated her. Because now, as he closes out each speech with her words of encouragement, Mr. Kerry can turn it into a message to every voter.
"Here's the deal," he said in Orlando. "You want to do the things we need to do to have clean air and clean water, and leave this earth in better shape to our children than we were given it by our parents? You want to lift this country up? Then give me the privilege on Nov. 2 of being able to stand up, and every day I go to that Oval Office I'll be able to look you in the eye, and I'll say to you, 'I've got your back.' "
"If it's true"??? Someone should jot that question down and pass it over to Ms. Bumiller and Stevenson. It's a phrase that would come in handy for them as they follow our vigorous, ebulliant, loyal and consistent Dear Leader from disciplined stop to disciplined stop.
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